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8/1/2020 1 Comment Poetry Type: AlexandrineConsidered a line of six iambic feet or a line of twelve syllables. It is usually the last line too. Spenser was known for using this line style in his poetry. The Alexandrine was used prior to Shakespeare and Marlowe. It was a common line style in German literature and French poetry.
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12/25/2019 0 Comments Form of the Day: BalladDEFINITION: A ballad tells a story, using rhyme to establish a regular cadence. The plot-driven poem has characters and rich imagery to show the narrative.ORIGIN: Began in European folk tradition. Originally orally shared until much later in the 15th-17th centuries when they were written down. Ballads often spoke of love, crime, social issues, and tragedy.
LINES: No establish number of lines. RHYME PATTERN: Tends to be alternating line rhymes, but it is common to see AABB within the rhyme pattern. STANZAS: Quatrains OTHER NOTES: Lines may contain only a handful of stresses. EXAMPLES: Samuel Taylor Coleridge’s “Rime of the Ancient Mariner” begins: It is an ancient mariner And he stoppeth one of three. —“By thy long grey beard and glittering eye, Now wherefore stoppest thou me? The bridegroom’s doors are opened wide, And I am next of kin; The guests are met, the feast is set: Mayst hear the merry din.” He holds him with his skinny hand, “There was a ship,“ quoth he. “Hold off! unhand me, grey-beard loon!” Eftsoons his hand dropped he. 10/31/2019 0 Comments A Brief Discussion on the VillanelleINTRODUCTION
Constraint-based writing involves a series of rules that imposes a pattern on the writing. With our conversations starting with Oulipo, the French experimental constraint-based writing group, it seemed fitting to explore potential influences on that group. Considering Oulipo’s French history, I wondered which historical writing forms not only influenced the birth of Oulipo-inspired writing, but which ones may still be a living component of the compendium. After all, Oulipo is designed to inspire writing through compulsory rules, i.e. constraints. What better way to do so than to look at a long-standing French poetic form, the villanelle. The villanelle, a fixed poetic form sheds light on the adherence to patterns, rhyme, meter, and style of French constraint-based writing, as a starting point for the development of constraint-based writing. Does it? Maybe, maybe not, but it is worth exploring. Is a villanelle a form of potential literature? Does the strict form free the content? Does it create spontaneous self-discovery of writing that would otherwise go unwritten? How can we discuss the historical poetic forms as the potential birth of contemporary experimental writing? I don’t have the answers to these questions, but in my exploration of the villanelle, I seek to find woven strands. HISTORY The villanelle originates from the French and bears a rich historical development. Originally, the villanelle stood as a ballad to imitate the songs of French oral tradition. The fixed poetic form became standard during the 17th century upon the publication of Jean Passerat’s poem “Villanelle” published in 1606. And while the villanelle has its origin in French literature, a majority of villanelles have been written by English-writing poets. Poets such as Oscar Wilde, Andrew Lang, Dylan Thomas, and Elizabeth Bishop are known for using the villanelle. The original form was often used to write pastoral poems, but contemporary poets such as Sylvia Plath and Seamus Heaney have used the villanelle to write outside of the original usage. “Villanelle” by Jean Passerat J’AI perdu ma tourterelle; Est-ce point celle que j’oy? Je veux aller après elle. Tu regrettes ta femelle, Hélas! aussi fais-je moy. J’ai perdu ma tourterelle. Si ton amour est fidelle, Aussi est ferme ma foy; Je veux aller après elle. Ta plainte se renouvelle, Toujours plaindre je me doy; J’ai perdu ma tourterelle. En ne voyant plus la belle, Plus rien de beau je ne voy; Je veux aller après elle. Mort, que tant de fois j’appelle, Prends ce qui se donne à toy! J’ai perdu ma tourterelle; Je veux aller après elle. FORM The villanelle consists nineteen lines outlined as five tercets followed by a final quatrain. The rhyme structure holds the form in place. Two repeating rhymes and two refrains exist throughout the poem. The first line of the first stanza acts as the last line of the second and fourth stanzas. The third line of the first stanza is positioned as the last lines of the third and fifth stanzas. The rhyme scheme is noted on the layout below as the lowercase letters: Tercet 1: Line 1 – refrain 1 (rhyme a) Line 2 (rhyme b) Line 3 – refrain 2 (rhyme a) Tercet 2: Line 4 (rhyme a) Line 5 (rhyme b) Line 6 – refrain 1 Tercet 3: Line 7 (rhyme a) Line 8 (rhyme b) Line 9 – refrain 2 Tercet 4: Line 10 (rhyme a) Line 11 (rhyme b) Line 12 – refrain 1 Tercet 5: Line 13 (rhyme a) Line 14 (rhyme b) Line 15 – refrain 2 Quatrain: Line 16 (rhyme a) Line 17 (rhyme b) Line 18 – refrain 1 Line 19 – refrain 2 No established meter exists in the villanelle. However, many 19th century villanelles used trimeter or tetrameter. Gary Kent Spain posted On the Plains, a trimeter villanelle to All Poetry. The poet deviates from the original form, an explains the reasoning as a rebellion against the way a villanelle ends. The clinamen permits a small freedom from an otherwise stringent adherence to form. On the other hand, 20th century, poets used pentameter. Giorgio Venetopoulos wrote a villanelle in iambic pentamete to exhibit the strictness that can be applied to the form. The content discusses the process of writing, and more importantly, the villanelle. Since the villanelle has no set meter, I see this as the writer further constraining oneself … although, poets such as Elizabeth Bishop took took many liberties in her villanelle, which allows the individual aesthetics to come through, as a shadow. FORM AND CONTENT The rigid form of the villanelle evokes a sense of obsession and compulsion as the refrains interact with the remaining lines. The form give way to a feeling of dislocation within the content. Moreover, the strict form requires the writer to focus on the form, thus freeing the content within the form. The sense of obsessions and compulsions, even mental dislocation is apparent in Sylvia Plath’s “Mad Girl’s Love Song” ::: Mad Girl’s Love Song “I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead; I lift my lids and all is born again. (I think I made you up inside my head.) The stars go waltzing out in blue and red, And arbitrary blackness gallops in: I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead. I dreamed that you bewitched me into bed And sung me moon-struck, kissed me quite insane. (I think I made you up inside my head.) God topples from the sky, hell’s fires fade: Exit seraphim and Satan’s men: I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead. I fancied you’d return the way you said, But I grow old and I forget your name. (I think I made you up inside my head.) I should have loved a thunderbird instead; At least when spring comes they roar back again. I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead. (I think I made you up inside my head.)” As I see it here, the constraints of the villanelle allow for generative distraction. In order to liberate a poem of pure intellectual thought and marry together both feeling and thought, one must force the mind into distraction. In this case, the distractions are the required rhymes and refrains. This notion falls in line with the mission statement of the Oulipio Compendium. By applying rules to the writing, the content takes its own shape, its own misgivings, its own liberties to become literature. T.S. Eliot called this the theory of dissociation of sensibility. Spontaneity. The villanelle requires labor on the form, but in doing so, it allows the writer to release the anxiety of creating a “good” poem, thus allowing the poem self-discovery. Thus, established poetry forms such as the villanelle, the sestina, and the sonnet act as the framework for the birth of true poems. By true poems, I refer to a poem’s content that is freed from the external stresses that come with writing non-structured, free form poetry. The content delivers without the worry of line count, rhythm, etc… poems pressured into a form are afforded creative liberties that may not come about without the constraints. I view poetic forms as a starting point for the current status of experimental and conceptual writing outlined via Oulipo and our contemporary view of constraint-based writing. 3/29/2018 0 Comments The AubadeDEFINITION: A love poem that esteems or dirges the rising of the sun. The poem can also be about lovers or love during the morning time.ORIGIN: French. The first usage was around 1678. LINES: Varies. RHYME PATTERN: Iambic pentameter, but of course, not always. Metrical variation is important. STANZAS: Varies. John Dunne’s The Sun’s RisingBusy old fool, unruly sun,
Why dost thou thus, Through windows, and through curtains call on us? Must to thy motions lovers' seasons run? Saucy pedantic wretch, go chide Late school boys and sour prentices, Go tell court huntsmen that the king will ride, Call country ants to harvest offices, Love, all alike, no season knows nor clime, Nor hours, days, months, which are the rags of time. Thy beams, so reverend and strong Why shouldst thou think? I could eclipse and cloud them with a wink, But that I would not lose her sight so long; If her eyes have not blinded thine, Look, and tomorrow late, tell me, Whether both th' Indias of spice and mine Be where thou leftst them, or lie here with me. Ask for those kings whom thou saw'st yesterday, And thou shalt hear, All here in one bed lay. She's all states, and all princes, I, Nothing else is. Princes do but play us; compared to this, All honor's mimic, all wealth alchemy. Thou, sun, art half as happy as we, In that the world's contracted thus. Thine age asks ease, and since thy duties be To warm the world, that's done in warming us. Shine here to us, and thou art everywhere; This bed thy center is, these walls, thy sphere. 11/16/2017 0 Comments AbecedarianDEFINITION: A poem guided by the alphabet. Each line or stanza begins with the first letter of the alphabet followed by each letter following, until the last letter is reached. Variations of the form occur. ORIGIN: An ancient poetic form that was commonly used to compose letters, prayers, and hymns. The modern literary world relies on this form for children's books, mnemonic devices and lullabies (think Edward Gorey and Dr. Seuss). LINES: Varies. RHYME PATTERN: Varies. Contemporary abecedarian poetry doesn't rhyme, but there are clear metrical relationships. Children's versions often rhyme and are very sing-songy. STANZAS: Varies. OTHER NOTES: EXAMPLES: John Disch's Abecedary, Carolyn Forché's Blue Hour, Edward Gorey, Dr. Seuss, and Mary Jo Bang's The Bride of E 5/20/2017 0 Comments Poetic Form: Epistle
Contemporary Example: Dear David by Matt Burgess This morning I looked for your book online and almost bought it from the evil giant but balked. Instead I wrote a poem in bed about a faux-leopard jacket while drinking coffee from a Bette Midler mug. Marcel says when he catches himself self-censoring he knows to add it anyway. Anyway I scrambled eggs before rearranging my book shelves, extracting the ones I can live without. Those I put in a box for prisoners (who want dictionaries and classic fiction, the website says) and later the buyer in Red Hook took a towering stack for a seventeen buck credit. I skimmed the spines and there you were! Like new! On the cover in blue pants, a violet plaid shirt, surrounded by bright particulars! Song of Andoumboulou: 40 Asked his name, he said, "Stra, short for Stranger." Sang it. Semisaid, semisung. "Stronjer?" I asked, semisang, half in jest. "Stronger," he whatsaid back. Knotted highness, loquat highness, rope turned inward, tugged. Told he'd someday ascend, he ascended, weather known as Whatsaid Rung... Climb was all anyone was, he went on, want rode our limbs like soul, he insisted, Nut's unremitting lift... Pocketed rock's millenarian pillow... Ideas on Mackey's Work: "Mackey writing of a ‘we’ who floated ‘boatlike, / birdlike’ (p.21), and on the third line the words ‘Semisaid, semisung’ give thematic prominence to this idea of a hybrid art." Notes on the poem: -paratactic lines (lines that are shorter without subordination) - alliteration is important -his work is in liminal space between music and poetry - sonic enjambment -manipulates lines by using homonyms… -many words seem to function as musical notes…. -motivated rhythms…Mackey chooses words and sounds to propel the poetry without necessarily considering the word itself…you could scan the work, but the prosody of his poetry is reliant on sonics—on musical beats— the words continue to trace back to other words within the poem. "Instrumental play, poetic play; consider the noun ‘Andoumboulou’, which are spirits invoked at funerals within Dogon cosmogony…" 4/3/2017 0 Comments Poetry Form: DohaDoha, sort of sounds like a doughnut or something, but it’s actually a form. Let’s look at it. I dare you to write one!
Origin: Hindi What’s it all about?
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