How It Works
After you reserve your spot, I will reach out with instructions for sending your manuscript and any background information you would like me to know before I begin. This may include where you are in the writing process, what concerns you have about the manuscript, what kind of publishing path you are considering, and any specific questions you want me to keep in mind while reading.
I will then read the manuscript in full and prepare a detailed editorial feedback letter. This letter will address the major elements of the work, including structure, pacing, voice, character development, narrative momentum, clarity, emotional resonance, and overall impact. For nonfiction and memoir, I may also look at argument, framing, scene balance, vulnerability, and how the material is shaped for the reader. For poetry and hybrid projects, I may look at sequencing, cohesion, image systems, line-level patterns, formal choices, and the larger movement of the collection.
This is not a line edit or copyedit. I will not mark every sentence, correct every typo, or rewrite your pages. Instead, I will give you a high-level editorial assessment that helps you understand the manuscript as a whole and identify the most important revision opportunities.
Once you have received the feedback letter, we will schedule a 30-minute follow-up call. During that call, we can talk through your questions, discuss the manuscript in more depth, clarify revision priorities, or focus on whatever will help you move forward.
What You Get
You receive a full reading of your manuscript, a detailed editorial feedback letter, and a 30-minute phone call after the review is complete. Your feedback letter will identify the manuscript’s strengths, the areas that need more attention, and the revision priorities that will likely make the biggest difference. I will be honest, but I will not be cruel. The goal is useful feedback, not vague praise or soul-crushing criticism. You will leave with a clearer understanding of what your manuscript is doing, where it may be losing momentum, what readers may need more of, and how to approach the next stage of revision.
Important Note
The $100 payment is a deposit to reserve your spot. It goes toward the total cost of the manuscript analysis. The full service is $450, and I will invoice you for the remaining balance. This service does not include a full developmental edit, line edit, copyedit, proofreading, formatting, publishing submission, or ongoing coaching. It is a comprehensive manuscript assessment designed to help you understand the work more clearly and revise with a stronger sense of direction.